Monday, October 10, 2005

Paper

Is there a thing
more romantic
than words
ink on
pale paper
enveloped
addressed
enclosing
loves finest intentions
how long
is a promise
-when words
give no mention?

4 comments:

__________ said...

I read your letter and Im looking up
seeing your eyes looking back at me
like the day we never met
Im seeing you now like I never have
and perhaps shouldn't
but it's lovely in your shadowed darkness
I beware the ninja sword

Night (smilie)

EL A. said...

I love this. Thanks for sharing.

Matt Getty said...

love those last lines -- "how long is a promise -when words give no mention?"

andrew said...

I really like your writings. You have talent much, i enjoy much what you have to say. Keep it up! Thank you, by the way, for the comment. Also, I'd ecourage you to check out Bradley Hathaway. You can hear some of his poetry at http://www.myspace.com/bradleyhathaway I love love love his style. ta ta.
~andrew